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So here I lay, suffering from my nightly dose of can't go to fuck to sleep, so I get the crazy idea of starting to write a short novella taking place in the Star Citizen universe. The story is about a young woman pursuing her dreams and she winds up on an adventure of her lifetime. Kinda basic, but here's the rough prologue that shoud set the mood for the story to follow. Somewhere in Virgil sector floats Hope class Endeavour, passing dangerously close to a dying star. Named the Pinnacle of Hope, it had served many years in UEE as a field hospital in the frontier wars against the unclaimed territories independence. A gunshot echoes the hallways, bouncing off the cold corridors. It was not followed by additional bangs, nor screams. Just pure silence. Like space itself it became calm again. However being absolutely and totally inexperienced writer (I've written nothing beforehand) I have no idea of structuring my text or creating interesting way of writing. So I'd much appreciate even the harshest feedback on those parts mostly. Story, characters and everything is a very ROUGH WIP. But I do have the basic storyline figured out. Here's what I've come up so far https://docs.google.com/document/d/13Mp3r-4r2QDdJqaeMGoaBhSaXCLLhg6FrtpF905yVO4/edit?usp=sharing Do bear in mind I haven't done proper formatting for this yet so it goes to shit in terms of readability after the first half or so