Nova Posted March 1, 2016 Share Posted March 1, 2016 (edited) Ok i put in here. Well after so much time i finished is bio. Name:mike Species:dragon - slime-shapeshifter hybrid Age:20 Gender:Male Hetero Appearance: Yellow eye, red skin scalp the kinda look like latex or rubber, skin is shiny, body covered in slime, white hair, yellow horns,has muscles but is not buffy. Abilities: shapeshifting, can turn into water water, elastic, can stretch like gummy Personality:overprotectic, sarcastic, kind, can snap out Relationships: Nova(Gurlfriend) Likes: Nova, meat, pranking,cake Hate: Feara, death, getting frozen Weakness: cold Fear:Cold, setsunsa(dat bitch is crazy) Hobbys: videogames, swimming,yoga Hates: strawberries packaged in plastic because they taste bad. Story: He lived on a planet with his parents and sister till feara came. Feara is a extreme strong magical girl that got so strong that she corrupted and spreads fear and despair , she is kinda god level like Nova. She destroyed planets and mikes planet. Mike and his family fleed from their planet and lost each other. He landed on Aurora where he meet Nova and her friends. Well he was full of rage and tryed to kill Nova because feara looks a bit like Nova. Nova is a pacifist so she didnt want to fight but had no choice to use tategami her weapon. She had problems to damage him because he always curved and evaded her attacks. It couldnt go on like that so Nova turned into her air form and created sharp and strong air streams and pinned him against a tree and explained everything. He lives in Novas house and each day their relationship got stronger. Give me some feedback Well Edited March 3, 2016 by Nova Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
#00Buck Posted March 1, 2016 Share Posted March 1, 2016 You english continues to improve. Keep posting. Watch out for ghetto blacks. Don't kick rocks in Africa. You will hurt your foot. 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 1, 2016 Author Share Posted March 1, 2016 40 minutes ago, #00Buck said: You english continues to improve. Keep posting. Watch out for ghetto blacks. Don't kick rocks in Africa. You will hurt your foot. Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrDingo Posted March 1, 2016 Share Posted March 1, 2016 Slime and shapeshifting and stretchiness and latex all in one creature just screams 'fetish'. To be honest it makes me a little bit uncomfortable. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 2, 2016 Author Share Posted March 2, 2016 6 hours ago, DrDingo said: Slime and shapeshifting and stretchiness and latex all in one creature just screams 'fetish'. To be honest it makes me a little bit uncomfortable. Dont worry i dont have a fetish. Well ask my dreams in mind , that is my only persona like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarcastic Coffeecup Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 So if it's slime, why is it a scaly then? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 3 hours ago, Sarcastic Coffeecup said: So if it's slime, why is it a scaly then? A hybrid *facepalm* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caledonian Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 You say it's not fetish. It does come across as fetish though. My main advice is flesh out the personality. Does he have hobbies? Fears? Does he cry easily? Also getting frozen is a strange dislike. But it seems he only likes or hates. You need to refine a tad to make it a better character 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vallium Posted March 3, 2016 Share Posted March 3, 2016 Why does everyone have god powers? Ah well nevermind. Sounds mostly fine and good anyways, its not my power fantasy. You do you, m8 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 49 minutes ago, Caledonian said: You say it's not fetish. It does come across as fetish though. My main advice is flesh out the personality. Does he have hobbies? Fears? Does he cry easily? Also getting frozen is a strange dislike. But it seems he only likes or hates. You need to refine a tad to make it a better character Thanks i appreciate that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 3, 2016 Author Share Posted March 3, 2016 I am gonna explain for all now why he dislikes cold. Well we know all water freezes at an specific temperature. Now imagine your body is covered in slime that has the same abilities like that of a snail and your body is mostly made of liquid. Now imagine all its getting very cold... he would freeze faster than everything and its not really awesome too freeze. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 And about the slime . Imagine you can shapeshift and bla bla bla and are prisoned somewhere then how can you please escape through a tigh wall crack or hole. If you skin is dry as justin biebers face then its difficult BUT if your full of slime its much easier to slip through. Like a slug I have for everything that i make an explanation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Glacier Posted March 4, 2016 Share Posted March 4, 2016 21 hours ago, Nova said: I am gonna explain for all now why he dislikes cold. Well we know all water freezes at an specific temperature. Now imagine your body is covered in slime that has the same abilities like that of a snail and your body is mostly made of liquid. Now imagine all its getting very cold... he would freeze faster than everything and its not really awesome too freeze. Did someone mention Frozen? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 4, 2016 Author Share Posted March 4, 2016 1 minute ago, Frozen Glacier said: Did someone mention Frozen? LET IT GO LET IT GO CANT HOLD IT BACK ANYMORE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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