FenrirDarkWolf Posted June 30, 2016 Share Posted June 30, 2016 So I'm making a fangame. Ace Attorney style, so, I figured I show post it here since I'm literally crap at writing. I'll post some things I have atm, and I'll update as I go. Feedback is appreciated. [5:47:37 AM] Fen: Okay [5:47:38 AM] Fen: Well [5:47:43 AM] Fen: it's TECHNICALLY not murder [5:47:54 AM] Fen: It was suicide covered up to look like murder [5:48:20 AM] Gator: that's even stranger [5:48:33 AM] Fen: So it happens at a radio station [5:48:38 AM] Fen: in one of the studios [5:48:48 AM] Fen: Said DJ is pretty famous [5:48:56 AM] Fen: He's bright, happy, cool and quippy [5:49:02 AM] Fen: Larger than life kinda guy y'know? [5:49:08 AM] Gator: indeed [5:49:17 AM] Fen: or well [5:49:18 AM] Fen: he was [5:49:28 AM] Fen: 5 months prior to the incident [5:49:52 AM] Fen: He and his wife had an argument that left them feeling bitter for a long while [5:50:06 AM] Fen: They did still love each other but the effect of the argument were still there. [5:50:28 AM] Fen: And.. they got in a car crash while he was driving, and she was killed during it [5:50:43 AM] Fen: And he blames himself for literally everything. [5:51:12 AM] Fen: His co-DJ is a pretty oblivious gal. Nice, but doesn't notice under the surface. [5:51:50 AM] Fen: She knew his wife died (she was at the funeral), and figured it was just that [5:52:03 AM] Fen: She offered her condolences, but wasn't exactly a listening ear [5:52:16 AM] Fen: So he started going to a therapist [5:54:05 AM] Fen: Well, first he went to get a check and was diagnosed with clinical depression and was prescribed anti-depressants [5:54:21 AM] Fen: Therapist tried to help, she did. But to no avail. [5:54:57 AM | Edited 5:55:05 AM] Fen: In their last session, he hinted about his suicide plans, and she tried to persuade him to not do it [5:55:19 AM] Fen: But he did it anyway, and she was completely wracked with guilt. [5:55:47 AM] Fen: When he did it, it was during his morning show, so literally his entire listening audience heard. [5:56:21 AM] Fen: His co-DJ immediately stop broadcasting, and manipulated the scene to make it look like she had murdered him. [5:56:33 AM] Fen: To protect the good reputation and name he'd made for himself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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