Chaosmasterdelta Posted October 15, 2015 Share Posted October 15, 2015 (edited) I know that a link to my stuff is already on another thread, but I have been told to share and post my story everywhere I can. I have shared this in the discord chat and have been told that it needed to be all past tense so this is a version where I tried to change it to past tense in the first few paragraghs (I was going to do the whole thing but I got lazy). I have also been told that I could post this in either this forum or Tutorial & Critques. Since I wanted reactions/comments/speculation about the plot/characters/world along with feedback, I chose this one. I cant think of anything else to say about this, except that the context is in and/or is Chaos's background in his bio so I'm going to copy and paste that. Thank you for reading :3https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SghWbqgXb8d-TRa0Tl9pKs4ET9Um1OEvzgtnRnc8cDk/edit?usp=sharing BackgroundHe was born as a human into a very bigoted and hateful world. At first he was like everyone else, blindly accepting and doing whatever he was told. But somehow he slowly begun to overcome the mind control and started thinking for himself. By the time he was 20 years old he was almost completely free from it and was having thoughts and opinions that were extremely different from everyone else's. He was also sick of never being free and over the years tried a few times to plan a way to escape. But none of them ended up happening. Then one day when he was at school he noticed what looked like some kind of time machine. By then he was so sick of all the discrimination and so desperate to escape that he did something without thinking of the implications. He used it to go so far back in time that nothing existed yet, not even time and space. There was only chaos. With only his mind surviving the nothingness, and through the power of chaos, he willed a whole new universe to form instead of what would have been created. One without a single atom of hatred, discrimination, or unfairness of any kind. But he soon found out that there were some things that was out of his control since he only added some guidelines to how the new universe should generally be. This universe wasn't perfect but it was unimaginably better than anything he could have hoped for with the old one. Edited October 18, 2015 by Chaosmasterdelta Updated the link so that it links to the finished version Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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